Thursday, April 20, 2006

Fiction

WARNING : Highly cheesy and uninteresting post..... u may avoid it



Let me portray a picture here.... Kinda nice it is if u can get into the shoes of one of the characters....

Woman, Mom, protagonist (aka heroine)
Daughter (who is just bloody cute ashte) called from now on as BC... bloody cute (somehow not in the mood to say fucking cute)

BC has a boyfriend, BF of course. CLiched i know, but nobody can avoid cliche can they?

Guy who runs a diner... Is friend of Woman....... Kinda close they are.... Woman shirks off the subject of whats between them everytime..... Mostly portrayed as grey area friends (one of the grey areas of the story)

Guy's nephew turns up from nowhere.... Is a bit of a trouble maker, irresponsible n all..... but good at heart and nice guy.... nephew and BD become friends..... well.........

Nephew causes enough trouble........ So is kinda forced to leave town (he leaves more on his own decision)..... By then BC and nephew have become "better friends" (I hope u get exactly what those two words mean).... and BC's relationship with BF has become way too comfortable, with the fizz having gone out or some shit like that...


Newphew makes long distance call to BC after moving outta town... that obvi gets BC thinking... So she ditches school (very studious kind... not found usually ditchin school n all), takes a bus into a town she has never visited and goes to meet nephew ! Nephew is cool n all... not least bit surprised... He only cares enough for u, that small smidgen, tiny amount required ashte... hence the lack of surprise.... If u saw him u'd almost think he was being rude.... they both have an innocuous nice day around town eating stuff of road carts, visiting CD shops etc etc... BC has to go back home.... when nephew asks her right at the end "Why did u come to visit me?!" She says "You didnt say goodbye"

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Grey area : What does BC feel for nephew?!

4 comments:

Krishna said...

maga yellindano ishtu complicated situations baratthe?? I think she likes him 'more than just a friend'

Anonymous said...

Intresting post dude...

Obviously she thinks of him as more than just a friend... but you got to understand that relationships are extremely complex things and sometimes difficult and sometimes impossible to interpret. I would say more info will be good but in a layman's opinion she feels comfortable with him(leaving town to meet him) + trusts him (for sure).

That last like was pretty romatic though(maybe a hidden message in it :P )

Kiran said...

hmmmm....:-|

Unknown said...

"You did'nt say goodbye..."

"OK - here you go, goodbye!"